Writing is utter solitude, the descent into the cold abyss of oneself. ~Franz Kafka
My two biggest problems at the moment according to Mr K, is:
a) Logic – He, she, action and so on.
b) Overwriting.
And you are writing for Mr. K? or for Miss Dew Drop?
Not that I know anything about it. I’m pretty much talentless when it comes to this kind of thing.
kafka's work, while brilliant, was rather pessimistic & sad. no wonder he had to hide in a cave (dark abyss in siberia) and write. so i agree with singleguy. bring back some sunshine. remember, kafka died young 😛
SG: That’s a good question actually, but I write mainly for me. And he never tries to interfer with my style, a least he hardly does it.
Hero: I’ve tried intervals of humour but I’ve come to the conclusion that it’s mainly a sad book. :/